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Image 6, "preperations" is misspelled. Later on, the line "your role is buying time" has the period typeset outside the bubble. Image 7, "reguard" is misspelled. Image 7, "swordsman" should probably be "swordsmen" a few times. Image 8, "no be deal" should be "no big deal."
 
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Hmm. Swordsman is singular and skelly is the only one who can become a Skeleton Swordsman. It's like saying he can become a Hunters Skeleton. Hopefully that works as an example. Working on the rest. Thanks for the feedback. @knismaps
 
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@omfganimal My understanding of the English is that Rena is saying there won't be any swordsmen among the people guarding the transport but that there will be three swordsmen at the exit of the tunnel. Those usages would be plural.
 
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This chapter is broken for me. I can't see any images, but can read the previous and next chapter fine. Any suggestions?
 
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@Tiriak I tried, no good thanks though, I just found some YouTube video of a guy scrolling through it because I got impatient to keep reading. Appreciate the suggestion, I'll try that next time I have a similar issue.
 
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One of the swordsman looks like that berserker women from the tournament.. did she get stronger? how else is she qualified to be a guard?
 
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Come on mr skeleton, girls don't like being used like that. Especially for the benefit of another girl
 
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That chapter ending was hilarious though. Such a serious chapter and it backfired at the end, because he talked to much just like with wolfboy.

Rena really liked him in the romantic way, which is a bit weird. For Rubia hes mainly a personal knight and friend. Gilles just saw him as an interesting useable pawn for now. Succubus was also hinted to be an Illusion or had ulterior motives that are still unexplained.

Still a bit weird though with the romance in Renas line, cuz hes already dead, but oh well. People marry their Pillows and Figurines in our world too.
 
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Rena's feelings will return.
Looks like the pendant was not upadated on her past description
 
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@Tomas28

Oh in chapter 1 before the 1st revival of the Skelleton she was the 1st important person to him. He lived 20 years in the future after the Demon Lords spawned with Mistress Succubus. The red skinned and horned lady. She was hinted to be just an illusion or have used Skelly though by Isaac in an earlier chap.
 
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oh, that was not her (CF my comment on previous chapter)
edit: @Zero13 i believe mistress succubus may be rubia's future...
 

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