The translation is fine.
But, I don't like how the translator grup manage the chapter. C'mon splitting a prologue, really?
Why not just take your time and do a full chapter 1 and 2, then release its at the same time.
In that way people can judge if this manga worth to follow or not.
After that you can decide when to release the chapter 3. The next day, next week, next month. Whatever.
Anyhow thanks for the translation.
And sorry for bad english