Thanks for the TL, it was pretty alright. Y'all fuckos in the comments are just mean.
One major issue tho. FurryBitch69's proper name is Setsuna, and not Senna. I'm pretty sure you accidentally entered her name as セッナ (senna) instead of セツナ (setsuna). This small ッ character called 'sokuon' doubles the consonant following it. It also written as the scaled-down version of the letter 'tsu' (ツ), hence the confusion.
This is especially funny in this case, because the only consonant that the sokuon cannot double is 'n', because there already exists a regular 'n' character, so I have no idea how it ended up as Senna. I legit had to do some JP input character-downscaling magic to be able to type it as セッナ, and it lowkey hurts my eyes to look at. 🤣
Also, I remember there was an 'Eve' that you guys forgot to capitalize, so there's that. Still, thanks alot for the TL.
EDIT: Spelling and a bit of elaboration.