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ArpanaR Fed-Kun's army Joined Apr 4, 2018 Messages 1,134 May 9, 2018 #2 Grammar is messed up, too many characters without any introduction....the potrayal of the story seems to be chaotic. And after going through all this mess, the ending isn’t very much rewarding ?
Grammar is messed up, too many characters without any introduction....the potrayal of the story seems to be chaotic. And after going through all this mess, the ending isn’t very much rewarding ?
