Eh... I'll just assume this release was a hobby translation for the lols. I'll give it a below-average score; There are several basic grammatical and spelling mistakes. Inconsistent typesetting, some text-bubbles lacks translations. Saying it nicely, you have potentials to develop more.
Oh god, this meme "snipe" is great, not to mention the duwang translation reference at the end...
When I first saw another version of this chapter, I thought, "Oh god, another one?!" but then I read it. 11/10 perfect TL
I'm sorry for the people who just straight to comment (w/o reading the tl credits page) or didn't bother to read the other comments before posting their own.