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[MangaDex]

 

[sinisempi]

koreans have to live this

 

[Thirtyfour]

2 chapters in a short span?
This is too good to be true. I can only guess Skeleton's dying soon.

 

[damywise]

need more

 

[Shea8]

for whoever would like to step in with the translation, here you have all the chapters until the 89 in Korean

 

[Simkin]

Really hoping someone picks this up again.

 

[captain_crunch]

Next commenter is a gugguuguug

 

[Redbone]

Somehow i can bane (from batman) voice at last page.

 

[bradek]

So, sword aura became black sword?

 

[legoman60]

That watermark tho.
Shame that the raws have it all over the place.

 

[kitkawaii]

“I better censor the watermark so nobody can tell where I took this from”

 

[CarpeCookie]

For anyone looking for the other chapters, go to Jaimini's Box. Shea was being a dirtbag and ripping the chapters from them and posting them as his own.

 

[marconii2002]

@Shea8
Stop dumping your trash here. We do not need it.

@CarpeCookie
Jaimini's stoped translating this at chapter 70

 

[sedition]

Why are people still working on this? the author admitted he has no clue what to do with the story, it's not worth the effort.

 

[RubyBoule]

@sedition
Neither did Eiichiro Oda, and look how that turned out after he found his stride.

 

[Simply_Fiction]

It's a classic example of someone starting a story without a plan. Have a general outline and a few ideas, introduce some characters that won't ever return or make a difference, break your own convoluted world rules consistently, etc.

It was a good concept but it falls short when you have no idea what to do with it lmao. Still, it's fun for a braindead read through the Cyber-Dystopia-Kraken-KnightyMcSwole-CatLady arc. Compared to that hilarious bullshit, this feels lacking really

 

[Shea8]

@marconii2002 you're welcome!

 

[sedition]

@RubyBoule The difference being that One piece arguably was always good, this thing fell off it's stride the second it started jumping all over the place instead of sticking with it's core concept of the main character dying until he eventually succeeds.

It was great at first, he'd make some progress and then fuck up and start over again, but the writer decided that wasn't good enough so they started switching through heroines, side characters, and story arcs until he found one he liked again.

Plus the power creep got out of hand almost immediately, The mc started getting thrown into people so far above his level that he couldn't do anything no matter what, The writer really wrote himself into a corner with that bit, because the only logical solution is to throw some deus ex machina in there to let the mc get away.

And that's not even really getting into the core problem which as I mentioned before was that the writer had absolutely no plan while writing, he was just throwing scenarios out each time and when it didn't work like he wanted he'd abandon it immediately by forcing the system to dump the mc into a whole new story without bothering to finish off the previous story line at all.