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[MangaDex]

 

[introvertchild]

Let's shoot a fucking rock. Great idea, lol

 

[MrFakOff]

New chapter wooot

 

[ultraleaf]

holy what was i reading

 

[endo54]

I am watching the manga here

 

[zdarkbrz_816]

hm, a moving rock...

*bang*

 

[Dezaki]

thats all the chapter? feels like it was half of it.

I rated this translation as "rediculous"

 

[ReaVen_LEAD]

So the synopsis of the chapter is MC feels lonly inside and is a little bit useless against rocks... seems about right.

 

[Bayaya]

I don't mind the translation but the art just really meh.
The MC look like a total wimp.

 

[whoamist]

Ore was the correct translation. keep up the good work, let me know if you want any help proofreading

 

[FloatyBee]

This was a lot better than the last one

 

[Varler]

It's pretty good for the first time! Thanks for the chapter!

One thing that can help is getting a proofreader who's a native English speaker.

 

[Azapuela]

i feel stupid reading this

 

[blackunicorn]

I don't know what the manga raw is like but I've read that part in the WN, and yes I did see a few miss translations at the end but for a first try with no proofreader it's good. Only thing I can say is if you want to keep at it ask someone to proofread it.

 

[Hoezell]

I don't think "despite being small, she has beaten us many times with a big hammer! that's cool" sounds right

 

[Wolvenworks]

remember when we had quality releases? this ain't it chief, but at least it's got clean hi-rez pages.

 

[KisaKasa]

wut

 

[VawX]

@ticktech are you really part of display: none; mmm...~?
If it's personal scanlation, use no group instead mmm...

 

[Kaiser92]

10 for effort, 1000 for quality scan 😁

 

[xathrya]

you are doing great, just improve the translation so it can be perfect.