Thank you for translating this, I was waiting for a long time for someone to pick this up. But you should strongly consider getting an editor or at least a proofreader. It's very noticeable that English isn't your first language.
Premise seems interesting but I'm not confident that the finer details as to what's going on are being properly conveyed. Both translation and typesetting need more work. But at least you're trying and that's more than most people.
I couldn't understand what was being said at all in the chapter. I honestly gave up half way through. I guess we will just have to hope someone else comes in to do this manga.