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Hmm.. It seems like an interesting story but there seems to be a lot of problems with the translations. (A few spelling mistakes and fluently)
Are you just using a translator? Cause if so you’d probably want to go over it and correct it as it does not sound very fluent.
Are you just using a translator? Cause if so you’d probably want to go over it and correct it as it does not sound very fluent.
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fixed.
@APinkFox
Thank you for your comment. As I've said, this is a solo project so I'm doing this all alone. I translate it first and leave it alone for a while then look back at it aain and edit the errors. However, I'm doing this all alone so errors can't be avoid. Please tell me more specifically where you mean so i can go back and rephrase/correct it.
fixed.
@APinkFox
Thank you for your comment. As I've said, this is a solo project so I'm doing this all alone. I translate it first and leave it alone for a while then look back at it aain and edit the errors. However, I'm doing this all alone so errors can't be avoid. Please tell me more specifically where you mean so i can go back and rephrase/correct it.
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The sentences are fine imo, not perfect but the intent is clear.
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Oh god. Kicks to the same spot on the shin. Oh god.
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@laila_18 Sure thing!
I’m kinda new to mangadex though so I’ll just put it all here:
(The page number will be written first)
2. “If this has been a bigger problem..” -> If this had been a bigger problem
2.”Such a bad luck” -> Such bad luck
2.“I’ll explain it when I got there” -> I’ll explain it when I get there
2.“Good that there..” This might be a direct translation but it would make more sense to say something like “Thank god there was a pretty girl who helped me”
2.”I haven’t ask for her contact yet” -> I didn’t get to ask her for her contact
3.”...if Xiao Yue is here with me” -> If Xiao Yue were here with me
3.”Why can’t I think of this earlier?” -> Why didn’t I think of this earlier?
4.”Our body aren’t sticked together!” -> Our bodies aren’t sticked together!
4.”..so he definitely have something good” - I’m not quite sure what this one meant but it doesn’t sound quite right.
4.”Xiao Nai is so brave normally” -> Xiao Nai is usually so brave.
4” You’ve said that countless time!” -> You’ve said that countless times!
(Side note: You might want a side note here explaining why his name is so unusual)
5.”Continues the school a year later” -> Continued school a year later
5.”Nummber of girls...” *Number
5.”Six in the high school” -> Six in high school
5.”He approach, protect and confess to Xiao Nai during the time she is weak” -> He approached, protected, and confessed to Xiao Nai during the time she was weak.
5.”Just as he wish...” -> Just as he wished...
5.”..he starts flirting with other women” -> he started flirting with other women
5.”... he has a new girlfriend” -> He got himself a new girlfriend”
6. The email corrected: A student of Weishing tried to steal an item from ... and laid a hand in the shops security.”
7.”Than You” *Thank
7.”..I used to take a lesson from a thief if the famous gang” -> I used to take lessons from thief in a famous gang!
8.”Sweetie, did you just broke up” *break up
8.”You’re drunk now.” Delete now
And that’s all I could find. I’m sorry if I seem kinda harsh about this > _ <;;
I’m kinda new to mangadex though so I’ll just put it all here:
(The page number will be written first)
2. “If this has been a bigger problem..” -> If this had been a bigger problem
2.”Such a bad luck” -> Such bad luck
2.“I’ll explain it when I got there” -> I’ll explain it when I get there
2.“Good that there..” This might be a direct translation but it would make more sense to say something like “Thank god there was a pretty girl who helped me”
2.”I haven’t ask for her contact yet” -> I didn’t get to ask her for her contact
3.”...if Xiao Yue is here with me” -> If Xiao Yue were here with me
3.”Why can’t I think of this earlier?” -> Why didn’t I think of this earlier?
4.”Our body aren’t sticked together!” -> Our bodies aren’t sticked together!
4.”..so he definitely have something good” - I’m not quite sure what this one meant but it doesn’t sound quite right.
4.”Xiao Nai is so brave normally” -> Xiao Nai is usually so brave.
4” You’ve said that countless time!” -> You’ve said that countless times!
(Side note: You might want a side note here explaining why his name is so unusual)
5.”Continues the school a year later” -> Continued school a year later
5.”Nummber of girls...” *Number
5.”Six in the high school” -> Six in high school
5.”He approach, protect and confess to Xiao Nai during the time she is weak” -> He approached, protected, and confessed to Xiao Nai during the time she was weak.
5.”Just as he wish...” -> Just as he wished...
5.”..he starts flirting with other women” -> he started flirting with other women
5.”... he has a new girlfriend” -> He got himself a new girlfriend”
6. The email corrected: A student of Weishing tried to steal an item from ... and laid a hand in the shops security.”
7.”Than You” *Thank
7.”..I used to take a lesson from a thief if the famous gang” -> I used to take lessons from thief in a famous gang!
8.”Sweetie, did you just broke up” *break up
8.”You’re drunk now.” Delete now
And that’s all I could find. I’m sorry if I seem kinda harsh about this > _ <;;
@APinkFox
Fixed >.<
About the side note, I can't really make one... T_T I'm translating this from a secondary raw (not taiwanese raw) which is also an official raw. There was no side note on that raw plus my chinese is level 0 so I don't really know why his name is weird. Sorry about that.
PS. I'm really glad to know that there is someone who read every single small text I've spent so much time TSing LOL
Fixed >.<
About the side note, I can't really make one... T_T I'm translating this from a secondary raw (not taiwanese raw) which is also an official raw. There was no side note on that raw plus my chinese is level 0 so I don't really know why his name is weird. Sorry about that.
PS. I'm really glad to know that there is someone who read every single small text I've spent so much time TSing LOL
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I'm usually interested in revenge stories but I do get concerned about how far they go sometimes (sometimes going too far in respect to what the bad guy did). I kind of wish there was more exposure on what specifically the ex-boyfriend did to the MC's friend to have her target him first by ruining his reputation. Right now, the only bad thing we see him do was flirt with other girls while dating the MC's friend. And after they broke up, he started dating another girl. At most, he deserves a slap to the face, not to have his reputation destroyed. This seems far too excessive. I feel like the story failed in bringing me in to cheer for his downfall because it didn't expose enough of his bad points
