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I'll just wait for Striptease to do this chapter... "same" instead of "save". Just horrible, you need to learn english at least on kindergarden level before you decide to do scanlating. Please delete your account, uploader, you obviously have an inflated ego if you thought that this crap you "worked" on was even close to being acceptable.
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The issue is that that's not really true, as having a personality disorder does not necessarily mean you have a lower intelligence or charisma.
It's unknown how long he was dating seven people at once for, and it is true people with ASPD tend to suffer from an inability to maintain relationships, however, psychopaths/sociopaths (which are put under the label of ASPD) are known for their superficial charm and charisma. They're also known for their infidelity as well, however, so it's not too unlikely that he could have been in relationship for some time with at least some of them before he let the cat out of the bag, as some high functioning psychopaths or sociopaths are able to remain undetected for years.
From the NHS's website:
-He exploits/manipulates Sayu by having her have sex with him as she's a runaway
-We both conceded and characters repeatedly state he lacks regret or remorse
-He repeatedly does not seem to understand what normal behavior is or how people act in certain circumstances, and cheating with seven people, having sex with a minor, and even just how awkward and unable to read emotions he is demonstrate it
-He has demonstrated that after his 7 girlfriends left him, he lost all his friends and connections, and was unable to feel attached to anyone, and so felt very alone because of it.
-We haven't seen his anger, but I believe it was implied that he gets nasty when he gets angry. Even if he doesn't, there is high functioning psychopaths/socipaths are able to actively hide or mask their anger under the sense of normality
-He doesn't necessarily blame others but he also doesn't take responsibility. He seems to think that the seven girls left him for reasons beyond his control as he describes it as something that just happened, and doesn't seem to understand why Sayu left him, because he seems incredibly happy to see her again.
-Again, sleeping with a minor for a quid pro quo situation, and wanting to do so again.
Of these, he undoubtedly falls into 3, 5, 6, and 7, could arguably fall into 2 and 1 and only dos not fall into 4 based on what we've seen.
I think it's pretty clear what's going on here.
That's undeniably an element, though he never admits that its specifically the dominance he wants, just that he wants to see her again. (Though, if he wanted dominance, I suppose it could be seen as him trying to have control over something, anything, in his life that seems to be falling apart.)
However, it's clearly not the only reason he does what he does. In chapter 18, he describes that he's lonely and wants to have someone at his side. He wants that "emotional wetness" as he says earlier in the chapter. He's not a malicious entity, he's just unaware of how his actions harm others and why what he's doing is wrong.
I think he's a tragic character more than a pure evil and vile person. I think that if had received the proper support group or network of people who cared about him and a received professional help, he probably could work past his disorder.
It's such as shame, really.
The issue is that that's not really true, as having a personality disorder does not necessarily mean you have a lower intelligence or charisma.
It's unknown how long he was dating seven people at once for, and it is true people with ASPD tend to suffer from an inability to maintain relationships, however, psychopaths/sociopaths (which are put under the label of ASPD) are known for their superficial charm and charisma. They're also known for their infidelity as well, however, so it's not too unlikely that he could have been in relationship for some time with at least some of them before he let the cat out of the bag, as some high functioning psychopaths or sociopaths are able to remain undetected for years.
From the NHS's website:
-He exploits/manipulates Sayu by having her have sex with him as she's a runaway
-We both conceded and characters repeatedly state he lacks regret or remorse
-He repeatedly does not seem to understand what normal behavior is or how people act in certain circumstances, and cheating with seven people, having sex with a minor, and even just how awkward and unable to read emotions he is demonstrate it
-He has demonstrated that after his 7 girlfriends left him, he lost all his friends and connections, and was unable to feel attached to anyone, and so felt very alone because of it.
-We haven't seen his anger, but I believe it was implied that he gets nasty when he gets angry. Even if he doesn't, there is high functioning psychopaths/socipaths are able to actively hide or mask their anger under the sense of normality
-He doesn't necessarily blame others but he also doesn't take responsibility. He seems to think that the seven girls left him for reasons beyond his control as he describes it as something that just happened, and doesn't seem to understand why Sayu left him, because he seems incredibly happy to see her again.
-Again, sleeping with a minor for a quid pro quo situation, and wanting to do so again.
Of these, he undoubtedly falls into 3, 5, 6, and 7, could arguably fall into 2 and 1 and only dos not fall into 4 based on what we've seen.
I think it's pretty clear what's going on here.
That's undeniably an element, though he never admits that its specifically the dominance he wants, just that he wants to see her again. (Though, if he wanted dominance, I suppose it could be seen as him trying to have control over something, anything, in his life that seems to be falling apart.)
However, it's clearly not the only reason he does what he does. In chapter 18, he describes that he's lonely and wants to have someone at his side. He wants that "emotional wetness" as he says earlier in the chapter. He's not a malicious entity, he's just unaware of how his actions harm others and why what he's doing is wrong.
I think he's a tragic character more than a pure evil and vile person. I think that if had received the proper support group or network of people who cared about him and a received professional help, he probably could work past his disorder.
It's such as shame, really.
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@dope_code Thanks for the chapter! There are some typos here and there, and some sentences are very confusing/wrong:
Page 2: "What a coincidence, I was just thing (thinking) about you!"
Page 4: "So, it's strange that I did not see your's (your) name on today's shift schedule"
Page 6: "Why are you seddenly (suddenly) kicking my leg?!"
Page 7: "I will reoprt (report to) the manager that you were slacking"
Page 10: "Why Yaguchi-san would have geen (is Yaguchi-san) in a place like this?"
Page 11: "Even though I setteled (settled) for now, and he moved out, but... meeting him in the smae (same) working place... meeting him is the worst"
"Asami is a very senstuve (sensitive) person. After she realized the situation, she came to same (save) me.
"I'm feeling very helpful and disabled at the same time. Also, I'm very horrible!" (???) WTF?!
Page 12: "For first if I see me, I ran away from home thought I will a friend who will worry about me" (???) WTF?!
Page 15: "They are'nt (aren't) bothered by that event"
Page 16: "But, for me, she jumped into the conversation to same (save) me"
"Yaguchi-san is also have been working (has also been working) seriously, he is very different than he used to be"
"These goods are already expied (expired)"
Page 17: "Can I do the payment (Can I pay?)"
Some panels are entirely all over the place / very confusing, I may have missed something else, still, hope this helps!
Page 2: "What a coincidence, I was just thing (thinking) about you!"
Page 4: "So, it's strange that I did not see your's (your) name on today's shift schedule"
Page 6: "Why are you seddenly (suddenly) kicking my leg?!"
Page 7: "I will reoprt (report to) the manager that you were slacking"
Page 10: "Why Yaguchi-san would have geen (is Yaguchi-san) in a place like this?"
Page 11: "Even though I setteled (settled) for now, and he moved out, but... meeting him in the smae (same) working place... meeting him is the worst"
"Asami is a very senstuve (sensitive) person. After she realized the situation, she came to same (save) me.
"I'm feeling very helpful and disabled at the same time. Also, I'm very horrible!" (???) WTF?!
Page 12: "For first if I see me, I ran away from home thought I will a friend who will worry about me" (???) WTF?!
Page 15: "They are'nt (aren't) bothered by that event"
Page 16: "But, for me, she jumped into the conversation to same (save) me"
"Yaguchi-san is also have been working (has also been working) seriously, he is very different than he used to be"
"These goods are already expied (expired)"
Page 17: "Can I do the payment (Can I pay?)"
Some panels are entirely all over the place / very confusing, I may have missed something else, still, hope this helps!
@Tamerlane
I want to believe you, but I'm willing to bet that this story is not going to plumb the depths of emotional disorder. In fact, he'll probably try to blackmail Sayu into having sex with him... Which blatantly crosses the "pure evil and vile" line.
I want to believe you, but I'm willing to bet that this story is not going to plumb the depths of emotional disorder. In fact, he'll probably try to blackmail Sayu into having sex with him... Which blatantly crosses the "pure evil and vile" line.
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Thanks for the chapter!
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He's angry that some wannabe-mangaka (that he's been reading till chapter 20) dared to insinuate this... Would you believe it???
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He's angry that some wannabe-mangaka (that he's been reading till chapter 20) dared to insinuate this... Would you believe it???
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thank you a lot for the new chapter guys!!! thanks a lot!!!
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Should of had a proofreading on this. A lot of words do not make sense.
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lmao the hell is this translation
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Thanks for the chapter but very rough translation and typos everywhere. Please get a proofreader and go back to fix mistakes in the future. Very confusing at certain points
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> get a proofreader
This is a lot of jank. Weird constructs everywhere. The atrocious spelling doesn't bother me as much as the obvious disregard for the target language in general.
You need both a TL and PR with native-level understanding of English, and they need to work well together.
This is a lot of jank. Weird constructs everywhere. The atrocious spelling doesn't bother me as much as the obvious disregard for the target language in general.
You need both a TL and PR with native-level understanding of English, and they need to work well together.
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