I don't know which translation is better, I don't speak English normally, I'm just happy this series is getting love because it's awesomeeeeee!!! of course, ideally it would be great to work as a team but ... who am I to say u.u/
Thanks!!!!!
The art is good but i don't think that the problem here is the subtlety of the language and complex cultural meanings but that the flow of the story is strange, will give it time.
Why translate a sequel before working on the prequel? No one's gonna have any idea what's going on here unless some hero decides to write up a comprehensive summary.