A Certain Boy and Girl’s Memories of a Valentine’s Day and White Day - Oneshot

[Darklight99]

Could use at least 1 more page.

 

[CyanHide]

God damn, there needs to be more

 

[AlexTga]

Cute

 

[Pokari]

I'm normally, all other things held equal, totally into revived-childhood-romance stories that stretch all disbelief. But this one doesn't do it for me somehow.

I think partially because they never sold me on any of the romantic feelings on either end of the timeline. Without any emotional investment on my part, all I can see is the patent absurdity. (Like, the apparent assumption that she would have held on to the purse because she still likes him—not, y'know, the well-loved childhood purse itself, whose origins are probably mostly forgotten in the mists of time? XD)

 

[unimortis]

@Pokari I share the cynicism, but sometimes one remembers the smallest things from childhood, especially about whoever one liked back then. doesn't make this story not improbable, but that aspect isn't the hardest for me to buy here

 

[AuntyJay]

whyyyyyyyyyyyyy

 

[Ryker]

Aaand later the husband comes to pick her up. The end.

 

[tinaholic]

shit balls this is soo cute!

 

[bingsoo]

apparently the author s making this oneshot into like a book that u can buy for 5-10 bucks on his twitter.

 

[faisal21]

Oneshot is fuuck

 

[Yawozah]

Aaaaaaaaaaaajhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

 

[namisora]

Made my heart skip a little bit

 

[noneofurbiz]

This is the most painful one shot ever