Dex-chan lover
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For a first chapter it could have done a better job of setting up the main character (actually I just read the whole thing and don’t know who the main character is. It really didn’t focus enough on anyone; I’m assuming its Bal). It wasn’t bad, but it also wasn’t the most exciting and didn’t do the best job of setting up the forthcoming story. For a first chapter its kinda disappointing. Still though, it seems pretty interesting and I liked it. Hopefully the next chapter expands on well everything more. For 50+ I really didn’t get that much out of this one.