A Normally Dowdy Man Is in Essence the Mightiest War-God - Ch. 1

[TNT261]

For a first chapter it could have done a better job of setting up the main character (actually I just read the whole thing and don’t know who the main character is. It really didn’t focus enough on anyone; I’m assuming its Bal). It wasn’t bad, but it also wasn’t the most exciting and didn’t do the best job of setting up the forthcoming story. For a first chapter its kinda disappointing. Still though, it seems pretty interesting and I liked it. Hopefully the next chapter expands on well everything more. For 50+ I really didn’t get that much out of this one.

 

[Dekisugee]

so a furry harem? k.


also, fuckoff tsundere

 

[UniXD]

ignorant dogs

 

[gat1024]

How did he get stabbed in the gut from above if the monster’s giant tooth is on the lower jaw?

 

[Kuyu]

It was hard to tell those girls apart during the adventure scene. One of those girls isn't loli enough to be tsundere. The story is a bit lackluster... but hopefully it gets better with chuuni Bal.

 

[Mistake209]

Something isn't right with the eyes.

 

[Aikpq]

There are no harem genres in this manga so I clicked it, but I think I was wrong.

 

[ADende]

Final fantasy level of belts and straps.

 

[Banesephy]

The author sure didn't waste any time in getting me to hate that girl

 

[TriviaZoe]

The art,the story,the characters... all subpar