All I saw was two old generals across a table from each other just grunting and hmpfing at each other over a battle plan. Which is to say I understood nothing about that meeting. Like all this told me is that he visited the guildmaster like he was told he needed to and they agreed I guess?
Wow this is pure garbage and a total waste of time. Seriously get a proofreader please. Actually try to put in effort. Anyone can see that this dialogue makes no sense.
I think MC's mask was in bad taste.
He would look better wearing bear mask. Add a bear fur cloak and cool-sounding stage name.
"From the red corner, BEEEEEEEAAARRR MASK!!" or something.
Whether you don't have proficiency in Japanese or in English or both, this translation is hard to comprehend. Hope you get better in ch 5 and redo ch 1-4.
Sorry for harsh critics
The translation is spotty, ya. You'll improve though as you keep at it. If you read this, just know i'm happy that you're translating it since if you hadn't, I never would of found it to begin with.