A Parallel World With a 1:39 Male to Female Ratio Is Unexpectedly Normal - Ch. 173 - Whispers of the Dreamworld

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@BB-62 page 3, I would change "Yuri-chan... went from wanting to be Miku's little sister, and now... wanting to be her daughter" to "Yuri-chan... she wanted to be Miku's sister, but now... she wants to be her daughter"

Page 8, you can remove "blood" from "blood sugar rush"
 
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Sou to Yuri:

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She's being stuffed with so much cream, what a glutton, and she's not even willing to share with her dear nee-sama. She must truly wish to indulge in it, if she keeps this up it's gonna take 9 months to lose all the extra weight she'll gain.
 
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A conversation between 1:39's God and the God of Sou's world

1:39: Hey we should trade guys you get population control and I get a straight guy

Old God: Sure (but I'm gonna give you a guy so dense it'd make Osmium say "Goddamn dude")
 

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