A Rank Party wo Ridatsu Shita Ore wa, Moto Oshiego Tachi to Meikyuu Shinbu wo Mezasu. - Vol. 5 Ch. 54 - Sad Story of a Hero and a Lover

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First of all, what the fuck is this plot armor? This is way too convenient. MC struggle against the fucking IMORTAL QUEEN and just so happened to remembered the story and able to recite the phrases from the story?

Also, who is this uncle? Why did he started the story that it will save MC one day. Make zero senses.

The story so far is pretty meh, but I enjoy the character developments so it's fine. This plot armor is just too lazy.
 
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This is starting to sound an awful lot like a Marvel movie.
 
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Author realized the uncle's story was shoved in way too unnaturally last chapter lol
 
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Also, who is this uncle? Why did he started the story that it will save MC one day. Make zero senses.
Guess uncle is some great adventurer who went through similar adventures before. Him telling the story makes, since he's talking to a kid who's parents recently died and the point of the story is to accept death and that death isn't the end. Depending on the kind of bizarre shit the uncle encountered, it might or might not be weird for him to expect the kid to meet the literal personification of death. However, it works either way since you should probably approach the personification the same way as the concept itself, since the personality should match.
 
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Me: Gods! This is prime garbage...

Also me: Yeah, but you also got to finish your plate the story.

Another me: Masochist!! admit it.. Admiiiiittt iiiiitttt....
 
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who was this writen for? The editor only?!?!?
for all paying fans?
I mean this manga has 61 chapter, and is entertaining with good art, team streaming is new (second manga?), likeable harem. The story could be better with more background information etc., but why should anybody invest (waste) time in a unknown manga?
It could end in 5 - 10 chapters (even with a "good" story), one good example is Masashi Kishimoto and his "Samurai 8" flop after a year of planning (I think 2018?)
 
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Guess uncle is some great adventurer who went through similar adventures before. Him telling the story makes, since he's talking to a kid who's parents recently died and the point of the story is to accept death and that death isn't the end. Depending on the kind of bizarre shit the uncle encountered, it might or might not be weird for him to expect the kid to meet the literal personification of death. However, it works either way since you should probably approach the personification the same way as the concept itself, since the personality should match.


Thank you, took this many comments to see someone who can remember.

The other comments mentioning asspull just don't remember the other chapters.


His uncle was the leader of the party with the guildmaster and guild receptionist that explored the colorless/endless dungeon that the MC party is currently exploring, decades ago before the kingdom decided to seal it and unseal it recently to explore it again.


It's not an asspull that the uncle would know stories related to adventuring. It's not an asspull MC knows it when it's been established that the majority of his skill set and knowledge came from being mentored by his uncle and self-study.

Is that unreasonable that Yoke would remember a story immediately that brought him to tears in the past?
 
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People complaining about the flashback when Yoke just literally met the Goddess of Death in the dungeon, same Goddess mentioned in the flashback. Seriously?

Also yes, the Uncle is a freaking legend actually. Something I believe the manga has depicted here and there in flashbacks and with people mentioning it in previous chapters.

Anyway, there's a hint of what will happen yo a certain 'hero' about the reborn into the all stream there.

Sure, don't like the manga for legit reasons. Fine, that's normal. But don't make up reasons just cause you have a reading comprehension problems.
 
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What if Yoke actually IS his uncle? And he is just preparing himself for what he knows will come in the future?!... What, it's not too far a reach when we consider this story already lol. Thanks for the chapter!
 
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I am going to be really disappointed if she doesn't respond with "Hero, you have spoken the Words, and you have spoken them rightly." 🤣

(so par for the course with this series)
 
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People complaining about the flashback when Yoke just literally met the Goddess of Death in the dungeon, same Goddess mentioned in the flashback. Seriously?

Also yes, the Uncle is a freaking legend actually. Something I believe the manga has depicted here and there in flashbacks and with people mentioning it in previous chapters.

Anyway, there's a hint of what will happen yo a certain 'hero' about the reborn into the all stream there.

Sure, don't like the manga for legit reasons. Fine, that's normal. But don't make up reasons just cause you have a reading comprehension problems.
No pulling out the uncle tells a story that MC suddenly remembers when meeting said death god... First question, why is the Uncle telling MC this story when he's so young? For what purpose? Why will it one day save his life? This wasn't foreshadowed or anything, this is the author pulling all this out of the ass to get an explaination and have it resolved quickly.

If it was really planned we'd have had more foreshadowing to this death god then just "Suprise I'm a deathgod oh now heres a backstory quickly that uncle tells MC about how to trick/placate her out of nowhere".
 
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Thank you, took this many comments to see someone who can remember.

The other comments mentioning asspull just don't remember the other chapters.


His uncle was the leader of the party with the guildmaster and guild receptionist that explored the colorless/endless dungeon that the MC party is currently exploring, decades ago before the kingdom decided to seal it and unseal it recently to explore it again.


It's not an asspull that the uncle would know stories related to adventuring. It's not an asspull MC knows it when it's been established that the majority of his skill set and knowledge came from being mentored by his uncle and self-study.

Is that unreasonable that Yoke would remember a story immediately that brought him to tears in the past?
I mean honestly I had completely forgotten about Yoke's backstory, so to me it was like wait what's happening, I just sort of didn't care, but coming here helped me figure things out
 

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