@ translator,
If I may suggest something, how about using 'Lóng' instead of 'Long' to avoid misunderstanding?
It is 龙 right? I haven't read the raw, so I'm not sure.
Anyway, thanks for translating!
Well, that was ... okay. Cute start, then kinda nothing much beyond that. Didn't really manage to develop itself. Unfortunately not the best scanlation either so bit tough to judge the writing, admittedly.