Abandoned: Tsuyosugite Buki ga Kowareru Yuusha to Buki Shokunin no Elf - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Unneeded

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  • The title: "Abandoned: The Hero Who's So Strong He Breaks Every Weapon and The Elf Blacksmith" -> Without an Oxford comma (i.e. ", and The Elf Blacksmith"), it sounds like the hero breaks the poor elf blacksmith, too. Though I guess the lower-case "and" also helps against this interpretation.
This title only has two items, "The Hero" and "The ... Blacksmith", so that wouldn't be an Oxford comma. I'm not sure if it's grammatically correct to add a comma between two items like that, but it does reduce ambiguity, so I guess it's fine.

I think it would be easier to just reorder the items for clarity (e.g., "The Elf Blacksmith and the Hero Who's So Strong He Breaks Every Weapon") but doing so might be considered unfaithful to the original title.
 
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Fun premise, somewhat interesting characters, solid character and world design, and especially a female character with realistic proportions? Count me in.
 
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Wait, is this even legal?

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Thanks for the chapter!
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imagine losing years of your life, for like a min worth of value
 
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I find it hard to sympathise with the protagonist when she wishes the demon king would return. It would be like if I wanted more people to use tanks and wished for you know who Austrian mustache man to come back
 
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I know it's to make us pity her but even I won't buy trash weapon that break when I lightly drop it to the floor
 
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The place she got dropped into reminds me of the Depths from Tears of the Kingdom.
 
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Despite being so obvious, its the first time i see a half dwarf, half elf on any media.
It's not just you, either - I've been into fantasy for like two decades, and this is literally the first half elf, half dwarf character I've seen... anywhere.

Half-dwarves are a rarity in general in fantasy. Your average D&D setting either doesn't mention them at all, or just flat-out states that humans and dwarves can't interbreed. Dark Sun is an exception, but even here half-dwarves (muls) are always sterile.
 

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