Even by the nonexistant standards of Dragon Quest ripoff garbage this is bad. Its written horribly, there simply is no pacing, and the characters are so bland and so uninteresting, so bad at expression of any kind it makes no sense at all. I don't think there's a single interesting thing about it, not even the usual big tiddy gf gang can find any value here.
How does something this bland even make it to print? I've seen sonic fanart that's better, at least those are interesting in a fucked up way