Aishuu Lava - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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There're too many "this" "the" in the first page.

The older version actually flows better in comparison.
 
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This looks interesting. I hope they get together after her sentence. Otherwise there is a bad power dynamic.
 
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I apologize for that it was used ichigo tools im sorry but now , this translator is normal and good, im working on hard it.
Brother, you need a native proof reader. The grammar and even spelling is not correct in a few places.
 
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Brother, you need a native proof reader. The grammar and even spelling is not correct in a few places.
"Native" isn't a guarantee of quality. Most people just "write as they speak", that's why so many "native speakers" can't use the correct "your/you're", "he's/his", "it's/its", "they're/their/there", and so on.
 

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