Akuyaku Reijo no Ani ni Tenseishimashita - Vol. 2 Ch. 7

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Chapter 8 at midnight? Lemme try since I got energized from me passing out last night.💪😎
 
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Poor sweet babies :(

Take care of all of em MC. Let them have happy childhoods!
 
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:bleh:Hi :3 damn didn't expect that to happen last night 😂✌️
Correction/suggestion time:huh:
P. 6: Do you want to start (study/learning) swords play seriously?
P. 7 ...Looking forward to train(ing)...
P. 10 (Probably a nitpick, but)
I haven't asked your name. (kinda sounds like "who tf asked?" To me, it's weird when phrased this way) -> You haven't told your name.
P. 11 Please stop the (it with) Ani-sama.
P. 13 Go to (the) training (personally think sounds better, can ignore it)
P 15 ...if she forget(s) me.
P 16 ...using his (her) fingers.
"Is this something I should be proud of?" Sounds a bit weird, if its Cain who is saying it. Dunno the raw meaning behind it, so I dunno.
P 17 "Apparently" Got out of the bubble a bit
P 18 "I'm not a nerd" Sounds a bit unprompted(no one called him that specifically, or anything for that matter) here, but I'm not sure.
P 23 In classes where age difference is minimal...
Minimal how? I assume the meaning is "it has minimal impact" But it's not clear here.
P 28 (bad) intentions
"Conqueror correction"? WTf is that?
Adults are pointless (I assume it was "muda" In raws) ->Adults are so useless
P 29 ...parents (love) us, but / (they are) not interested...
 
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Correction/suggestion time:huh:
P. 6: Do you want to start (study/learning) swords play seriously?
P. 7 ...Looking forward to train(ing)...
P. 10 (Probably a nitpick, but)
I haven't asked your name. (kinda sounds like "who tf asked?" To me, it's weird when phrased this way) -> You haven't told your name.
P. 11 Please stop the (it with) Ani-sama.
P. 13 Go to (the) training (personally think sounds better, can ignore it)
P 15 ...if she forget(s) me.
P 16 ...using his (her) fingers.
"Is this something I should be proud of?" Sounds a bit weird, if its Cain who is saying it. Dunno the raw meaning behind it, so I dunno.
P 17 "Apparently" Got out of the bubble a bit
P 18 "I'm not a nerd" Sounds a bit unprompted(no one called him that specifically, or anything for that matter) here, but I'm not sure.
P 23 In classes where age difference is minimal...
Minimal how? I assume the meaning is "it has minimal impact" But it's not clear here.
P 28 (bad) intentions
"Conqueror correction"? WTf is that?
Adults are pointless (I assume it was "muda" In raws) ->Adults are so useless
P 29 ...parents (love) us, but / (they are) not interested...
P 28 kanji is so fucking difficult I even searched the word on a lot of kanji dictionary and it's the same🥹
 
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Imma write this on my note and try to fix them.

Insert cj oh shit meme
Correction/suggestion time:huh:
P. 6: Do you want to start (study/learning) swords play seriously?
P. 7 ...Looking forward to train(ing)...
P. 10 (Probably a nitpick, but)
I haven't asked your name. (kinda sounds like "who tf asked?" To me, it's weird when phrased this way) -> You haven't told your name.
P. 11 Please stop the (it with) Ani-sama.
P. 13 Go to (the) training (personally think sounds better, can ignore it)
P 15 ...if she forget(s) me.
P 16 ...using his (her) fingers.
"Is this something I should be proud of?" Sounds a bit weird, if its Cain who is saying it. Dunno the raw meaning behind it, so I dunno.
P 17 "Apparently" Got out of the bubble a bit
P 18 "I'm not a nerd" Sounds a bit unprompted(no one called him that specifically, or anything for that matter) here, but I'm not sure.
P 23 In classes where age difference is minimal...
Minimal how? I assume the meaning is "it has minimal impact" But it's not clear here.
P 28 (bad) intentions
"Conqueror correction"? WTf is that?
Adults are pointless (I assume it was "muda" In raws) ->Adults are so useless
P 29 ...parents (love) us, but / (they are) not interested...
 
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My man, take a freaking sleep and a rest. You're the only people i know TL-ing this. If you down the entire TL also down
 
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Correction/suggestion time:huh:
P. 6: Do you want to start (study/learning) swords play seriously?
P. 7 ...Looking forward to train(ing)...
P. 10 (Probably a nitpick, but)
I haven't asked your name. (kinda sounds like "who tf asked?" To me, it's weird when phrased this way) -> You haven't told your name.
P. 11 Please stop the (it with) Ani-sama.
P. 13 Go to (the) training (personally think sounds better, can ignore it)
P 15 ...if she forget(s) me.
P 16 ...using his (her) fingers.
"Is this something I should be proud of?" Sounds a bit weird, if its Cain who is saying it. Dunno the raw meaning behind it, so I dunno.
P 17 "Apparently" Got out of the bubble a bit
P 18 "I'm not a nerd" Sounds a bit unprompted(no one called him that specifically, or anything for that matter) here, but I'm not sure.
P 23 In classes where age difference is minimal...
Minimal how? I assume the meaning is "it has minimal impact" But it's not clear here.
P 28 (bad) intentions
"Conqueror correction"? WTf is that?
Adults are pointless (I assume it was "muda" In raws) ->Adults are so useless
P 29 ...parents (love) us, but / (they are) not interested...
P28. He said shomonai.
 
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While I really appreciate getting so many updates, as this is a very fun series, please slow down my man, and take some rest :)
And if you don't do it for yourself, then I'm sorry, but I have to... There's quite a few mistakes in today's chapter, so it's better to slow down to catch them. :)
 
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Someone already pointed those out and I'm currently working on fixing some of the notable mistakes as we speak :)

And sorry for the mistakes,I'm working on this project solo which is also why my team named nerissa's BARELY COMPETENT jailbird :meguu: :aquadrink: :dogkek: :notlikethis:
While I really appreciate getting so many updates, as this is a very fun series, please slow down my man, and take some rest :)
And if you don't do it for yourself, then I'm sorry, but I have to... There's quite a few mistakes in today's chapter, so it's better to slow down to catch them. :)
 
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Diananium reminds me of Mei's Masternium from Reborn as a Space Mercenary: I Woke Up Piloting the Strongest Starship!
 

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