Whoah, thanks for continuing this, much appreciated!
Regarding the chapter, if new monsters keep spawning when close to stairs to next level, I wonder if it could work like a great grinding spot? Defeat monsters, loot the coins, go to the hidden shop/rest station to recover and finally go back up for more monsters? Also, Anna is such a nice girl, caring about others first.
As for the quality, considering you're new to this, it looks good in my opinion - only thing that I can point out is on page 6, shouldn't it be "we still haven't heard from them" instead of "we're still haven't hear from them"? Other than that, keep up the good work, @TesutoLTSF.