One small note, you forgot the volume/chapter number in the title for submitting this. As it is with just "Paris, Paris, Paris" as the title, it will always show on top of all other chapters...so as time goes by it'll look really out of place :x
Honestly it feels like the author is unsure of how to treat his characters. Sometimes they show respect and understanding of mental struggles but then he just kinda sweeps it to the side and keeps on keeping on.
@saintguardian
Thanks for your excellent work, as always.
Author's honestly a bit schizophrenic when it comes to dealing with mental issues and problems, but this is a rom-com (emphasis on the comedy), so I can give that to the author, at least.
And damn, as a 6' 1" guy, most women are shorter than me, so can I just say - I freaking love tall women? Gorgeous.
@Kaiser92 if you mean the thing at the top of page 11, with the "Rustle" SFX above it...it's a map that the guy is holding. View the image by itself and zoom in a bunch, should be clearer that it's part of a folded up map.