Anata no Danna Uwaki Shitemasu yo - Vol. 2 Ch. 9 - VS. Slime

[ieatass69]

Readable but very bad grammar. Please get a proofreader or at least run the translation through a grammar checker.

 

[DonHazzy]

@mommunism not you it seems, why the fuck are you reading it?

 

[mommunism]

@DonHazzy It's almost as if... you have to read something... to know whether you'll like it. I know this is a super complex concept, but try a little harder next time please.

 

[Simpleton]

Also spelling and grammar got worse in the middle (probably showing you got tired), so if you can't find someone to proofread you, it could be enough to just take a day off when you are done and then come back and check yourself with a fresh mind before publishing.

 

[real-faker]

Is ThAt An UnDeRtAlE rEfErEnCe?!?

Also, looks better with the edits. Thx!

 

[Tamerlane]

Omega Flowey as the demon king is kinda funny,

But let's all appreciate how he said he's not gonna deceive her anymore so he's gonna have his affairs in the public.

 

[Juggernautbob]

When will she leave him and we get yuri? It's getting boring quickly

Never, read the tags and note the lack of a Yuri tag