Aniki no Kanojo ni Naru, Onnanoko ni Nacchatta Otouto. - Ch. 305

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Cute face, big boobs, perfect size, an otaku? Isn't this... a perfect girl for everyone here? I mean... this one doesn't mind staying as a girl for you, what's not to like? I mean... come on...
 
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Hasn't been part of the series for that long and she already popped her cherry with a toy, this is literally her third appearance

Truly an otaku
istfg why can't it be me
 
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We all read too many doujins to know where this is heading...

See! You really bought a *****!
No! That's not mine! I mean, it is! But! I've never used it... yet...
.........
Wanna try it?
(or something along that line...)
 
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They are basically being poisoned by a succubus
No they're not? I really don't know where you got that idea from.

Haruki and Akira both are succubi. Kanata is taking succubus "medicine," if you could call it that.

But in all three cases, it's firmly established that the transformation only happens if you really, genuinely want it to happen.
 
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I have not seen the raw, but I can already tell some of the awkward TL-ing done.

Page 4 mostly. The rest of the pages were fine.

1st Bubble

I can already infer that she switched to "polite speech" at that time, obviously referring to her lying about what she did on the first day(s) of being a girl. I'm not sure if anyone else picked up on it, it isn't clear tho. I picked up on it because I thought it weird and actually said it out loud. That is when it hit me. "Ah, this must be an attempt at polite speech". Then it made sense

SFX text around the girl

The "Sigh~" seemed odd, especially when the Male Lead (aka reader) also had a "Sigh~" SFX attached to their own speech bubble. So I read it with a bit more critical mindset and keeping context in mind, I guess it was the SFX for "breathing heavily". When you put the girl's SFX as "Sigh~" and when the ML/Reader's SFX for the speech bubble as "Sigh~", it does create a bit of dissonance and implying, in english, that the two SFX are one and the same.

Keeping context in mind, the ML/Reader's SFX for "Sigh~" has more of a "breathing out while expressing a tiredness out of the situation" while the girl's SFX for "Sigh~" has more of a "breathing hard in embarrassment while trying to keep cool on the situation and not get caught in a lie".

In this case, I would have personally gone with "Haaa... " "Haaa..." with the girl to indicate her heavy breathing while keeping the "Sigh~" for the ML/Reader's speech bubble SFX.

Little EN Localization thing for this, but I would guess it works.

Again, I have not looked at the Raw so I can't be 100% sure, but this makes more sense.

On that end, thank you for the TL!

Edit: This work has an ASMR work done for this. I haven't listened to it yet but I stumbled upon it and I was surprised.
 

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