Aru Hi, Totsuzen Gal no Iinazuke ga Dekita - Ch. 6

[alto129]

Does she wanted her otaku crush to be stolen by a gal?
Is she into netora

 

[Lunkli]

You know, I think this glasses girl has only his best interests in mind. There is absolutely nothing worrying about her at all, nope. "I'll guide you to happiness, only I can"? Haha, how wholesome. Nothing wrong with that. Not weird or creepy at all.

 

[19801980]

Good chapter thank you

 

[immy]

First thing that came into mind

Spoiler: with first thin book

 

[rozert]

Every frame of Mentor girl irl feels like Monogatari series is leaking xDD

 

[olivetho]

cool chapter.

gonna do what i see some people do on other series and point out a few things that stick out to me SL-wise:

• page 3 - is the word "up" supposed to show up twice? because it doesn't really make sense grammatically, whereas only appearing once would.
• page 24, 2nd panel - i know that this is how the sentence structured in the japanese raws, but japanese tends to occasionally flip around the order of words in a sentence as compared to english. i think it'd flow much better if text in the 2 bubbles was swapped, but left otherwise unaltered (with the exception the ellipses and the full stop trading places) - it just sounds far more natural, without changing the meaning of what's being said.

there might be more stuff, but those are what stuck with me after reading the chapter. otherwise good job though

 

[spectacure]

There’s something wrong with her, both actually, the issue is obvious with the black haired girl, the gyaru on the other hand is an anomaly, she’s either got some skeletons in her closet, or the character writing for her simply just sucks no in between, there’s no way she’s not forcing herself to act this way there has to be a reason