Bannou Skill no Rettou Seijo ~Kiyosugiru no de Binbou ni wa Narimasendeshita~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

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Really bad case of sameface-syndrome between mc and princess going on here. Additionally the artist seems to struggle with action scenes. There is no flow, no investment, it's just stuff happening. The worst offender in this regard is still chapter 3 where it was near incomprehensible and the pages even seemed out of order.
 
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The actual fuck did i just read 🥲

It literally just jumped from event to event, without any proper transition and the princess literally is just copy paste mc, in the end the demons just vanish and overall you just cant connect to any of the characters since its just jumping around
 
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What's up with the art? Its a noticeable difference from the previous chapters.
Also the story just seems to randomly escalate with little to no proper build up.
 
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Well that was deflating. I expected blood and ended up feeling dissapointed by how one sided it was. Like cmon man... not even as much as a scratch? Unserious ass threat 🥲
 
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Really bad case of sameface-syndrome.
Yh i agree.
Additionally the artist seems to struggle with action scenes. There is no flow, no investment, it's just stuff happening.
I dont like long fight scenes so im okay with it. I just wanna know "who" the opponents were... what their motives were... their general tactical plan... their goals... everyone's stance and the battle results. These points served the overall plot and story... if fight scenes is ur thing, there r definitely better comics in that aspect. ("My avatar's path to greatness" being my most recent read, not a GL)
 
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Saint and hero are childhood friends. Their hometown is in this kingdom. The hero works for the neighboring kingdom. Fine.

The portrayal of "mind controlled because I said so" is not a good look, but since the hero was trapped in ice the last chapter; we can predict where this is going.
 
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Really bad case of sameface-syndrome between mc and princess going on here. Additionally the artist seems to struggle with action scenes. There is no flow, no investment, it's just stuff happening. The worst offender in this regard is still chapter 3 where it was near incomprehensible and the pages even seemed out of order.
artist seems to struggle overall, making stuff way too dark and blotchy with smudgy dark spots.
 
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artist seems to struggle overall, making stuff way too dark and blotchy with smudgy dark spots.
Yeah it made everything look too shaded, but in a badly uncontrollable way, as if everything’s got a light source on all the wrong places.
 
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I... I don't even know what to say at this point... What was event the point of going to her hometown if she didn't even stayed there a night to see her parents, friends, teachers etc? It could have been a random town in any place and no one would care. Why did they have to leave in such a rush? If the town was sooo far away let the horses rest a night at least, prepare everything to leave in the morning, make a plan! What was the princess doing in ANOTHER country? Because, as far as I remember, the MC hometown was in the country she run away after being expelled from her party. If the demons "knows everything", why did they wait near the castle, were security should be more high, instead of attaking that town where the princess was? What was the point of intruducing that loli demon, who supossely was so strong, if she just dissapeared instead of fighting a tired MC (remember she's using that technique that consumes lots of mana)? And don't make start with the pacing, storytelling, and action scenes... Geez, just give me yuri and I'll try to not think to hard next time...
 

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