The translation seems a bit scuffed unless the Futabanet raws are wrong. These are just some of the issues I had with the chapter's translation.
Zeno should be Zenon.
Page 8:
First person PoV panel's text bubbles.
The one on the right is fine but awkwardly written.
The one on the left is being said by Soara. "... If I leave"
The single panel next to that.
"There's no need for you to worry."
Page 9:
As much as her party members were dicks, there is no "LOLOL" or "Pfft" or "Hmph" in the bottom 3 panels.
Page 13:
"I'm a hero now, but you're still just a normal person. Well... Just keep praying."
"If I do, can I come with you?"
"Ah, sure"
Page 14:
The raws do not specify how long she prayed for before she received the revelation. She just prayed "every day."