the story is draaaaagging, the "main" characters barely have any interactions. just make a story about the two dads, author, if that's what you're interested in lol.... also, why make the FL a modern woman if it's to erase her personality right away and make her barely more than a cardboard cutout at the receiving end of the plot? like, there were moments when they discuss HER OWN possible arranged marriage in FRONT OF HER and everybody in the room reacted except her (even when, as readers, we have access to her inner monologue, even if she has to keep front she should normaly react in her head, but no, because the author forgot to give her a personality...)
also, while im venting, i wish they could move on when describing a character... there's so many times i can read about the ML being a beast and the FL being beautiful before i roll my eyes and go "i get iiiiiiiiiiit"