Behemoth no Hanamuko - Ch. 7

[MangaDex]

 

[UdenEmpati]

thanks for the translation, really like the attention to detail in the way the ML's name is written, and the language flows nicely from panel to panel.
Not even a correction, but I think it's sad you missed the opportunity on page 27 to have him say

"the way you shower him with affection is pretty anomalous"

to echo that Behemoth is called an anomaly, and the senpai is clearly broken up over her toxic affection toward the ML and being potentially set up as a rival of Behemoth's (in addition to wanting to kill her on a professional level).

But that's just a personal thing for me, really enjoying this series thus far so thank you for bringing it to us.

 

[TL-Law]

thanks for the translation, really like the attention to detail in the way the ML's name is written, and the language flows nicely from panel to panel.
Not even a correction, but I think it's sad you missed the opportunity on page 27 to have him say

"the way you shower him with affection is pretty anomalous"

Shit, that’s good!

 

[inkindoug]

thanks for the translation, really like the attention to detail in the way the ML's name is written, and the language flows nicely from panel to panel.
Not even a correction, but I think it's sad you missed the opportunity on page 27 to have him say

"the way you shower him with affection is pretty anomalous"

to echo that Behemoth is called an anomaly, and the senpai is clearly broken up over her toxic affection toward the ML and being potentially set up as a rival of Behemoth's (in addition to wanting to kill her on a professional level).

But that's just a personal thing for me, really enjoying this series thus far so thank you for bringing it to us.

So good, it's been changed haha. Thanks for both the suggestion and support!

 

[TheBigMonk]

Thanks for the chapter!
Sorry sexy crazy lady, everyone with good taste is here on team "Make Behemoth that man's wife".

 

[Salfaro]

Thanks for the HQ chap, good to see the cover outfit.

Felt like there were a bit more proofread misses in this chap though, ex "of no concern me" vs "of no concern to me", "higher up's" vs "higher ups", "anomaly's mouths" vs "anomalys' mouths" (which could be right but here would need "an" before it) and I think one or two others. Not a big deal, but it made the TL feel a bit stilted at times.

 

[HighStream]

They've got those MIB letter names and neuralizer

 

[inkindoug]

Thanks for the HQ chap, good to see the cover outfit.

Felt like there were a bit more proofread misses in this chap though, ex "of no concern me" vs "of no concern to me", "higher up's" vs "higher ups", "anomaly's mouths" vs "anomalys' mouths" (which could be right but here would need "an" before it) and I think one or two others. Not a big deal, but it made the TL feel a bit stilted at times.

Thanks for the corrections, they have all been actioned. You're 100% right, this chapter was PR'd in a hurry. I apologise, I'm just fuming with the fact that the MTL group had dropped it for nearly a month, I thought we were in the clear to carry on putting out full chapters and for the chapter list not to look such a mess too... But just as we were getting ready to post, they drop another steaming pile of MTL garbage (after taking yet another name from our TL as their own).