The first chapter was just *chefs kiss* great.
Pure tension all the way through..
And when you get to the end, what a fucking climax..
Worth the read, really want to see how this evolves, especially because most of the author's works I saw if not all of them aren't long at all, they're at most 3 chapters long.. And there seems to be some pretty good characters..
But that's just my opinion, read it to form yours.