A question about the translation: on page 7, when it says "It's too
barren", does that mean that the room is too empty, i.e. they are all alone and it could seem suspicious?
Also, a thought about lines and acting: if I was going to help someone practice for voice lines they weren't used to saying, I would probably want to find out
why the character they are playing would say those lines. E.g. is the detective's daughter saying that something is gross because she is reacting to somebody making a pass at her ("Hey little girl, wanna come home to me and look at my Gundams?" "Ew dude, back off!") or because she just found a week-old onigiri at the bottom of her school bag ("What's this... EEEWWW!")?
In other words, what's her motivation?
This has no bearing on my enjoying this manga, of course. I just like to think about stuff like that.
@Sundial Woah. Is that fan art or art by the original author? If it's fan art, it's really well done.
@Jmann @Vini The big difference between this manga and Kubo-san is that the MC in Kubo-san is an outsider on account of being socially "invisible" rather than an adorable little edgelord like Ichikawa. I can absolutely recommend it, as it is similar to this but different enough that it doesn't feel redundant.