Boku wa Imasugu Zense no Kioku wo Sutetai. - Akogare no Inaka wa Jingai Makyou deshita - Ch. 2

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Oh no, what is Sora gonna see in the countryside? His grandpa seems really strong and soft, and his grandma is really lovely. But the countryside seems really dangerous.

Well, at least Sora won't be so sickly and hungry all the time anymore. He deserves to live, he's really cute!
 
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"Dungeon".
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Why, man.
Just, what a disappointment. The story actually had really good world-building, attention to detail -- slowly introducing the reader into a modern world with some fantasy elements poured on top of it, properly explaining how the tech affects the body, etc.. Actually making it seem like the writer gave two thoughts about the world they write about, and then...

"Dungeon".
Just immediately gives off bad vibes about this story.
But it can pull through, as long as there's no "system", or "skillz", or "drops", or "xp", or any of that shit. Gamification and litRPG has their place, but not in this story. Not when it tries to sell off the idea of "magic in modern times". That'd be such a bizarre bait-and-switch.
 
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Yukino, Yukio, Sayuki, Takayuki.
What about the kids?
Did they run out of Yuki for the children's names?
 
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After eating the food, Sora was able to communicate telepathically with the people around him if only for a short moment, as seen in Page 18
 

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