Bouryoku Banzai - Ch. 14 - Dreams

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I knew the moment she had him in a chokehold, it was over for him...

Interesting fight, writing man vs man fight, is so easy... the most challenging part of this type of story is adding a woman into it and don't make her look weak, boring and useless.

Good job writer. Looking forward to see where this story goes.
 
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Let's hear it.

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Teppu
Black clover
Shy
Frieren
Yomi no Tsugai?
Isekai Samurai
cutie coliseum
Psyren
Ippon Again
Ben-To
star strike it rich
Blue Ursus
Tenkaichi has Fuma Kotaro
Batuque

Kakutou Shoujo Densetsu Harukanaru Ring​

Kinniku Jorei​

Saotome Senshu​

Hatch Potch Panch​

Mabataki yori hayaku!
WARNING! Everything beyond this is dangerously horny:
Rosen Garten Saga
Air Master
Keijo
Booty Royale
Killing Bites
Thank you for the list, bro
 
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Ok it's one of those series with an actual mary sue, i get it.
It’s amazing, very rarely is the “power fantasy chad that can beat anyone” story ever actually different

It’s fun seeing the MC in this type of genre be a woman for once & actually trying something new
 
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...... if only he knew that he was 2x her weight and used that to his advantage. He literally could have jumped on his back to flatten her. Spare me the whole, "he was panicking" BS. This manga established he is a Champion. The muscle memory would have kicked in and drop her.
That was the point she was making, that if he actually fought without all the sport rules he’d actually be the strongest but since he didn’t, he lost

Tbf the way she won was well-written imo you really do go down fast af when you’re in a choke hold, wouldn’t matter if you’re “muscle memory” kicked in

They even showed him doing exactly what you described but was passed out before he could do anything
 
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Lol, I really like when these guys get angry over people calling out this manga's bad writting and saying "let us enjoy our Baki-like".

Baki at least spells to you everything is dumb as fuck, even the art with the weird ass face expressions. Here we have the beggining being at least a bit believable, to then making the female character (literally a normal, with no apparent muscles, high school girl) not being hospitalized when getting rocked by a professional guy that weights double what she does and trained more than her. Like, even I like ridiculous elements, when they're properly established since the beggining in a story (And don't come to me with "Urd durr, look at the name of the manga :angery::angery::angery:", this shit doesn't excuse shitty writting.
It was always dumb lmao its initially over the top ever since the first chapters

It knows what it’s doing lol
 
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hm is this gonna be every fight from now on in this manga? almost losing then by some point got saved by plot armor?
 
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hm is this gonna be every fight from now on in this manga? almost losing then by some point got saved by plot armor?
Depends on the author really. I do think it’s going to get pretty old watching the tired formula of “MC tanks ridiculous amount of damage and then wins” but I doubt it’ll go in that direction. The fight was flawed, but not fairy tail levels of bad.
 
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My problem is the story is just way less interesting compared to the original premise in the one shot.
Yeah, I feel like this is always going to annoy me no matter how much I want to give the author a chance. I’m always going to be thinking about how we could’ve gotten a much better premise but some editor decided to ruin it🫤
 
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