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The page with the partial black border and falling flowers being a flashback is rather confusing. It's not at all clear that it's not happening in-line with the rest of the story. The time in the hospital and difference in age both coincidentally being four years only adds to the confusion.This page states that her sister had been hospitalized for ~4 years...
I love creative end-pages like this. I'm also grateful that this group didn't do the gigantic end-pages like some groups do. There's no excuse for these to be significantly bigger than the actual pages of the manga itself, and that's not including the double-page spreads. Some groups have credits end-pages that are so huge that when I load a new chapter it pushes the first page completely off the screen. If you do that, then your mother's a whore.That first page recipe was awesome