Children - Vol. 2 Ch. 13 - The Children

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That ending was rushed as hell

MC's turn was too quick

This bitch should have been dead


At least the two second-best girls were alive, and I hope MC got reformed

Edit: Nope, MC's fucking dead. I still can't fucking believe he was the one actually tied to this shit, because that opens so many plot holes as I outlined earlier.

I hope he can be a good dad for Mirai in heaven at least.
 
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The story sure could have a bit more chapters to develop better, but if you ask me it was either driving Mc crazy or he would have a dark past as well. The ones that survived were the best ones because out of the cucu nest that was that place they were the ones that t had "common sense". The only think I didn't like was the head teacher surviving. As all the "adults" she should have died. Well that's my opinion, it was short but I liked this crazy story
 
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was thi axed? everything felt rushed, it could have used some extra chapters to explore some of the stuff presented here
 
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i dont believe for one sec head teacher is alive.

ending is ok. overall this story is ok.
 
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@Legend13 her destiny is ambiguous, but it seems she somehow survived. I could be wrong and that's a delusion of a character that did suffer a lot. It's an open ending, personally I don't like keeping it open, but for story purposes it works rather well. Like "you can't pretend to be normal and I'm going to be a ghost that reminds of that all of your life" kinda deal.
 
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There are still several unexplained things... But at least I'm glad Rinko and Shiiru survived. They were the best kids. Probably.
... I do wish we had more of the story. Among other things, about Mama. She seemed nice but also strangled Sakurako?
 

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