@Eidetic_Paarthurnax
Compiling some typos listed in the discussion:
On page 2, "if you ever like dying" should be "if you ever feel like dying" or "if you ever feel like you're going to die". The first one sounds like he wants to commit suicide though, so I think it should be the second.
On page 8, "That's helped" should be either "That helped" or "That would help". The first makes sense if he's talking to Chiyo and saying it's good that Shuuto left, the second makes sense if he's thanking Shuuto for leaving. I think it should be the second, since it seems like Shuuto should still be in the room.
Also, thanks for the translation. I'm glad that cliffhanger has been resolved.