Chiyu Mahou no Machigatta Tsukaikata: Senjou wo Kakeru Kaifuku Youin - Vol. 6 Ch. 30

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A little too obvious. But I could like to see where this is going.
 
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I don't trust this bitch. I ain't buying it. She's the
necromancer/sorceress
 
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Got to be Nea, that's why he recognized the voice. The hot body fits too.
 
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Usato should light the most western style of all western style houses on fire. That would be a nasty surprise for the necromancer, and probably an unexcected one as well.
 
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Why anyone is surprised at the lack of subtly for the "surprise twist" I will never know, modern story telling assumes that the audience is more brain dead than these Zombies and therefore needs every plot twist to be explained step by step as it progresses so that they know exactly what is happening. That way writers don't need to think too hard about how to write.
 

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