Chounin A wa Akuyaku Reijou o Doushitemo Sukuitai: Dobu to Sora to Koori no Himegimi - Vol. 3 Ch. 12 - The Great Labyrinth of Orcs

[HaphazardMage]

I swear to God this artist has a fetish for little boys or something bro

 

[theincident]

shota foodgasm

 

[vodkavodka]

I completely missed how hot her dress was the first time MC visited the village. It even shows her pubic hair, the artist knows his craft well.

 

[Arin-san]

Alright, it was fun and okay at first but now I'm starting to get bored of this shit.

When I started reading this, I expected a high school life manga, not this bullshit. It was okay for one or two arcs. If this was not a 25+ page manga then this kind of pace would have been unbearable.

Also I just noticed that this is a monthly manga. This kind of pacing is absolutely horrible for a monthly mag. Thank God I started reading this late and there are 27 chapters available to read. If I had to sit and wait for this every month I would have dropped this crap.

 

[sanglyon]

That's the kind of low effort manga that makes people think isekai=shit. From the story that doesn't even attempt to deliver on its premise, to the lazy writing, it's only boredom after reading all my suscribed updates that makes me read through the available chapters, but at this point I know I won't click that "add to library button".

FFS, after the isekai currency=yen, Nauzicaa-ripoff glider and the AK47, what takes the cake for me are the elves in traditionnal japanese hakamas training with japanese bows in a japanese-style archery range.

 

[starfish]

I'm not sold on the guns either... Usually in fantasy settings firearms don't scale at all. It's strong at first and useless at the end. Like what's he gonna do when he reach A rank? Build a wind magic powered RPG? It's nonsense, he would have been better off practicing the sword and magic properly. Considering how good the prince is at fire magic and swordplay I can't imagine the MC perform well in a duel against him without an asspull.

 

[colorlesseatstomboys]

I liked the part where they said he's being impacted by his child brain, finally some manga used it.
But he's 13 now, I'm not convinced they're implementing it properly now, he should he a horny teenager at this point looking to breed the milfs but he doesn't even pay them attention 😭

 

[Latte10]

Like other cultured man says "we love us some butt cracks".

Well buddy that bracelet is foreshadowing some segss (I am copium)

 

[SalvySaroj]

It's heavenly good with nice long chapters🌟, i agree but when is main fan-services arc gonna come.

 

[Ikarugashi]

Is the elf queen's butt crack showing on page 25?

Easy Access 😭

 

[gravreverse]

oh yeah, why is he not using his sword? he's preparing for a SWORD FIGHT

 

[csebi]

Her ass is unprotected bruh

 

[cheekibreeki]

Nah people think this is a villainess isekai

It's a progression litrpg set in a villainess otomege setting with an absolute bad end deadline, MC is trying to kill the bad end to save his mom and village, making the villainess fall in love is just the sidequest

 

[rujash]

I expect the next arc (wind tower) to be boring filler. Fingers crossed they don't just jump immediately to it.

 

[Kitsunemm]

A [Bracelet of Fertility], huh?

Spoiler

Knowing the true nature of the "heroine" and reading about her karmic retribution fate on TVTropes, my sadistic side would take that bracelet, mod it with a curse so that it can't be remove once equipped and force it on her. Would that be too much ?

I disagree

Spoiler: Novel ending

the heroing ending was too bad like thehis originalgoal was that the game ending was dark and he didn'twant the villianos to end like that but they madenit so the heroin ended with that dark ending which was not right, you know why? Becauseshe was not evil and all the bad thing she did was without even understandingwhat she is doing, her mind was that she in in the game and that is her world, if the mc did not steal from her she would not have broken that far and lets not forget even with all that her ending was really bad and dark and she doesn'tdeserveit/SPOILER]

Her end is one of those scene that really angered me

 

[Snowave]

AK-47,

man that just break the immersive of the story

I mean why ak47 in this otome game?

 

[Celiohogane]

Why did this guy even learn Swordsmanship for years if he was just gonna make guns?

 

[AnonymousContributor]

bro aks cant shoot shotgun bullets or slugs get a fucking compact weapon lmao

 

[AnonymousContributor]

what I wanted to see when I started this series: a kid who loves his mom achieves his goal of saving his fav and the country by exploiting game knowledge and hard work in a fantasy world

what this series turned into: gratuitous gun nerd trivia with gunfights that include zero fantasy elements??? zero effort aircraft travel?

guns in a fantasy story as a gag is one of the best, but this author takes it so seriously idk seems like the author mighta actually wanted to write a modern war story to me

tbh guns could work somewhat better if they were historically accurate: aka the medieval single shot powder ones

but if your immersion was broken by the literal modern or 19th century clothes characters wear or buildings/furniture in other isekai then uh idk man

 

[radstylix]

Alrighty time to drop this manga. 👋
He's not quite overpowered yet, but he's overpowered enough to make the story boring.
Being invisible and having a fricking AK can do that.

Now on to how to improve this. Don't mind me, just reflecting as a writer:

• No modern guns and vehicles, at least this early! Also, he's an aeronautics engineer so he should have NO experience creating weapons.
• Every skill, especially "cheat" skill MUST have downsides. Even if there aren't downsides, there MUST be repercussions for overusing them (e.g. he gets careless from overusing Concealment and gets himself or someone else injured).
• I really don't like that random lolicon out of nowhere...
• I really don't think he should've been able to save up that money to buy the Alchemy scroll in just two years. I feel like 5-20 years would have been more feasible.
• Him bringing up his past life as an aeronautics engineer just made me roll my eyes. There has got to be hints for that.