Clevatess - Majuu no Ou to Akago to Shikabane no Yuusha - Vol. 3 Ch. 17 - The Flow of Nations

[MangaDex]

 

[spons]

for a first timer the typesetting is amazing. I don't know japanese or the original text either but it's very readable. thanks for the tl

 

[egi321]

This look great! Thanks for bringing it back!

 

[hourai]

Nice, thank you for the chapter !

 

[NeloDante]

It lives! Thanks!

 

[AbuHajaar]

No visible mistakes

Even typesetting is great

Good job

 

[BadmanBlues]

Thank you! Great work!

 

[Levankua]

Great work!

Looks like the legendary weapon is truly no joke.

 

[Ironclad]

Imagine the smell.

 

[BadLuckPoppy]

Page 13 bottom left, i don't think the word is "vvwith".

 

[Assaultsquirt]

This series is too good to be abandoned for so long.

 

[alacaelum]

Thanks a lot for picking this up, I don't like to sound ungrateful but waiting months between chapters really kills the pacing, but I am glad to what the last team did for this series.

As far as I can say, it is really good work with the translation, the wording of the phrases made sense in the context they were present, and the proofreading is solid, I do think your typesetting has room for growth but I would be disingenuous if I said that for someone first time it wasn't really incredible work.

It seems Clevatess can still manifest himself by using the blood within the hero, doubt he can do much, but still better than nothing.

 

[hgpnguyen]

Page 11:
"Why didn't they follow those that bug guy?" -> "Why didn't they follow that bug guy?"
"It is obvious they stayed because they didn't want to die" -> "It is obvious, we stayed because we didn't want to die"
The girl is on the same side of the bug guy so it should be we.

 

[welcome2atlantis]

Ha, so he's got a strong backer too. That answers some questions.

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter and picking this up. You did a good job

 

[Hoaxer]

Page 13 bottom left, i don't think the word is "vvwith".

Page 11:
"Why didn't they follow those that bug guy?" -> "Why didn't they follow that bug guy?"
"It is obvious they stayed because they didn't want to die" -> "It is obvious, we stayed because we didn't want to die"
The girl is on the same side of the bug guy so it should be we.

Thx for the response, it's now fix

 

[danbellucci]

Since they made Dorel competent and Clevatess ruthless to other foes, I thought this might be the kind of manga where they stab the unconscious bug guy in the heart so that he isn't a threat in the future when he regains consciousness. disappointed.

 

[hgpnguyen]

Since they made Dorel competent and Clevatess ruthless to other foes, I thought this might be the kind of manga where they stab the unconscious bug guy in the heart so that he isn't a threat in the future when he regains consciousness. disappointed.

But that is Alicia, not Dorel or Clevatess. It is already established that she is a heroic, kind character so it make sense.

 

[dezzot]

Thank you for the translation!

 

[NotALewdGuy]

So Dorel's Devil Beast Faction is where they co-exist via slave-master relationship or something akin to it?