fine with ethel, but i personally think etelle is a really pretty name- saw some comments and i do agree etelles meaning is more relevant since she was a sorta light in his dim and painful life <33
i do agree shit seems really rushed and i dont really like the pacing
@Nitronic0 nope, these chapters may be equal in length but as many of the comments and tler said, the pacing is really ...??? kinda poorly done which is why actions seem quick or out of the place. im assuming author wants this arc done or a plot point to be passed, but its hhgg