Cupid's First Love - Oneshot

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Good story, but goddamn the art irritated the hell out of me. Generally well done and composed but the author's insistence on giant boobs at every angle and opportunity really depreciates the character design. Give empty space a chance to breathe, ya know?

Wing design is absolutely top notch though :thumbsup:
 
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huh...

it's cute alright
but... serialization...?

I mean... where to go after that?

I'm afraid dragging the romance after that end scene, or adding more details in between for serialization might just decrease the charm.
Converting it to Shonen? with the boy as some kind cupid's assistant ?
 
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huh...

it's cute alright
but... serialization...?

I mean... where to go after that?

I'm afraid dragging the romance after that end scene, or adding more details in between for serialization might just decrease the charm.
Converting it to Shonen? with the boy as some kind cupid's assistant ?
trust in the author to make a banger storyline

the regime knows best
 
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trust in the author to make a banger storyline

the regime knows best
uh... the regime of what?

and, looking at the author... there's only one-shots there... ?
so... no, unfortunately, I can't have that much trust for now

for this one shot in itself, I can comfortably give it a 7 or 8 if it just ended there
beyond that...
¯\( • _ • )
 

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