Looks like this one is a bit too heavily inspired by What Does the Fox Say? from Team Gaji, lol.
There have also been many other stories like that already, though I can't be bothered to look up the titles.
I wonder if there'll eventually be anything here that will feel new or fresh, but it currently doesn't look like that at all.
I'm not saying it's a bad story per se, but it seems so unoriginal that I can't really take it seriously. If it doesn't happen to be your first time reading a story like this, a particularly high rating for this should be out of the question by default.