Daiyogensha wa Zensei kara Nigeru

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It's story book format. The mc is telling her life like it's a story she's reading to you. It gives off a distanced feeling.

Very plot driven. To the point it might feel a bit like it's being tugged by the hair instead.

The art is good though, and although the pacing is fast I can still follow what's happening. The pages are wel put together, so it holds up well.

Not the best piece of writing, but certainly a fun en enjoyable story with cute art and a passionate MC. ESPECIALLY CUTE FASHION!!!!
 
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The story is all over the place.
Feels like the author kust to ram as much detail in each pane sacrificed the flow of the story.
Just when am immersed in the story it jerked in a completely opposite direction and it gets tiring to read.
 
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Art is nice, but that's it. Everything else is a mess.

MC clearly says her first life she ignored all fashion and romance, focusing only on school and martial arts, but when the story starts (30+ years and two reincarnations later) she's suddenly a master of fashion and romance... What?

Second life, MC clearly states that Great Prophet's master's of grand magic and guide the people with specific visions about the results of different possible life choices, however she is identified as prophet when they see she has ZERO mana and is incapable of magic... What? She also never guides anyone at all with visions... What?

This is just the start of the rampant and cascading massive contradictions written in the story. If you can turn on your brain and go "Ooh~ pretty pictures!" then have fun, if not, don't bother.
 
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OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH, WOAH THAT CLIFF ALSO WTH IS WRONG WITH PEOPLE TO TAKE A PICTURE WHERE THEY'RE CORNERING A CAT WITH KNIVES ??!!! WTF IS WRONG WITH THEM THIS IS REAL LIFE !!!!
 
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@frungy she said that she wasn't able to dress up since she was so caught up with martial arts but she always wanted to, she's still human after all and you can read magazines...etc and who knows maybe she has a great memory, she also said that she always wanted to wear that kind of clothing, the first chapter just doesn't have all the details since it's a first chapter and you don't know, some things may have been lost in translation, it's not an official one after all!
 
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@MinGenius Even if she flipped through a magazine or two, or even if she had a *really* good memory, the level of instant expertise is way over the top. I mean, she's not only creating a wide array of clothes (and not just a snapshot of current fashion, but the entire progression of fashion as well) from scratch with skills that exceed the master clothier of the age, but she's also crafting perfect jewelry and other things that any other person would dedicate a lifetime to achieve in just one of those things. I'd also think that if she was *also* awesome enough to have a photographic memory, or had a history of excellence in detailed handicrafts that the story would be sure to say so.
 

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