Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu (Fan Colored) - Vol. 3 Ch. 158 - The Guard Students Reflect

[MangaDex]

 

[Geako]

A lot of work. Let's see if it's okay but kanaria is good. Everyone is good.

I didn't noticed the darkness of Hinata's eyes, After coloring I could see it was lines screeched on eye.

Aya and Kanaria has heart eyes.

 

[Vas_Tyo]

Thanks for your hardwork

 

[dimox]

Honestly, this chapter... doing it must be tiresome with such a load of text to go over.

I see you made some corrections to Yorukoi's version already... especially P8 bugged me, good it got addressed. And Aya now properly asking about the number of wives. Nice.

There are still some corrections left, like on P2 the missing "IS" in "IF MIKU IS NOT CLOSE BY..." and such, but I sent already sent you a message regarding that stuff so I won't repeat myself here.

All that's left to be said is good job on the coloring part.

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Suzuki Tooru:
...IT PROBABLY WON'T CHANGE MUCH.

Oh, Suzuki-kun... you better go to see an eye doctor. Your glasses seem to fail you. I know, ignorance is a bliss, but you can akready see traces of the calamity that is about to unfold.

 

[MrTurtleMan]

I don't think Aya knows what a friend is, those are not conversations you have with a friend

 

[Geako]

I don't think Aya knows what a friend is, those are not conversations you have with a friend

At page 5, I was "what a Pure person."
At a page 6, "A determined Financee."
Return my excitement.

 

[Kaiserwald]

Honestly, this chapter... doing it must be tiresome with such a load of text to go over.

I see you made some corrections to Yorukoi's version already... especially P8 bugged me, good it got addressed. And Aya now properly asking about the number of wives. Nice.

There are still some corrections left, like on P2 the missing "IS" in "IF MIKU IS NOT CLOSE BY..." and such, but I sent already sent you a message regarding that stuff so I won't repeat myself here.

All that's left to be said is good job on the coloring part.

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Oh, Suzuki-kun... you better go to see an eye doctor. Your glasses seem to fail you. I know, ignorance is a bliss, but you can akready see traces of the calamity that is about to unfold.

You missed "is": "Aya is now properly asking..."; sorry, but I couldn't overlook that. And you made a typo in "already".

 

[dimox]

You missed "is": "Aya is now properly asking...";

That one was deliberate, but be my guest

 

[MarqFJA87]

@Geako On page 3, the monologue keeps changing from present tense to past tense in the second and third parts.

 

[Geako]

@Geako On page 3, the monologue keeps changing from present tense to past tense in the second and third parts.

I thought it was funny that she was giving a prophesy.

 

[Psychronia]

I'm sure Hana's plan won't backfire at all. Nope.

Hinata is definitely the greater threat.

 

[MarqFJA87]

I thought it was funny that she was giving a prophesy.
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It doesn't like she's telling a prophecy, she sounds like she's retelling an already happened event.

 

[StandFab]

I thought it was funny that she was giving a prophesy.
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The comment section of this manga is one of the last places I expected the Bible to show up.

 

[rakkunburns]

Oh wow hollowed-eye Hinata is scarier colored.

 

[Geako]

Oh wow hollowed-eye Hinata is scarier colored.

I noticed it after coloring, similarly Sakura's eyes in chapter 44 were also found to be scary during coloring.

 

[shadowmasstitan]

The comment section of this manga is one of the last places I expected the Bible to show up.

Manga is entertainment. Even Christians like me love good stories. FYI there is a romance manga with a guy working at a church and falls in love with a Foreigner girl that comes over to Japan. It's a very sweet manga. So anything can influence a good story.

 

[StandFab]

Manga is entertainment. Even Christians like me love good stories. FYI there is a romance manga with a guy working at a church and falls in love with a Foreigner girl that comes over to Japan. It's a very sweet manga. So anything can influence a good story.

I'm Christian too, but you've got to admit the dissonance is great.

 

[shadowmasstitan]

I'm Christian too, but you've got to admit the dissonance is great.

I am completely agreeing with you. Just wanted to give you my perspective too. 👍