Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu [R18] - Ch. 130 - Natsuki Hinata, Starts Losing Restraint — 4

[BanzaiYuri]

"At the time" ok phew, not 1st raw = preggo, but still they gonna keep raw + creampie and she's gonna end up 1st preggo (but surely she'd abort unless she falls off her "no child" policy?)

 

[rakkunburns]

I got a bit uncomfortable there. Sou just assaulted Hinata.

 

[Xonthelon]

Why am I not surprised that this chapter become the one with the most comments of the (r18) series?

Sou, too bad, the fun is over. Get ready for taking care of ~15 children simultaneously.

Well, I guess there is still time to pump those rookie numbers up to 39. That said, among all named characters only Mashiro, Ruri (and the other two newly introduced fellow guards from the other class), his teacher, Kanaria's sister and maybe some other classmates (not sure if they have names or not) are left.

Honestly I would prefer faster releases for the main story over more chapters for this version.

 

[tetsuryuu01]

Can't wait to reach the specific raw chapter where she actually get pregnant

 

[Imatoumi]

Reddit's finest white knights fighting for a basic situation of two people fucking without restraints
Absolute late in french thought process

 

[Kaito57]

I mean, honestly... I'm just surprised that it didn't happened yet lol

 

[draco0305]

This definitely constitutes rape.

I'm not going to argue that rape shouldn't be depicted in fiction. Any subject can be depicted in fiction, but serious topics demand serious treatment.

Sou betrayed Hinata's trust. She told him to stop, and he didn't. He even apparently got her pregnant, even though that was something he KNEW she was afraid of and didn't want to happen.

That is not something that should just be glossed over like it never happened.

If the story is to maintain its suspension of disbelief, Hinata needs to be upset about this, and Sou needs to acknowledge that he did something very, very wrong.

Aren't you reading far too much into a porn Manga ?

 

[EchoGirl]

well...at least she's unlikely to turn out like her mother b/c sou willl still be around unless she gets more possessive and jealous when he has a turn with someone else

tho despite ppl calling this ver of mc more of a 'douche' or whatever i'm sure he'd still be like "i'll take responsibility" or having everyone also take turns helping (assuming other women can be trusted with a mother's child)

DESPITE SHE IS ON PILL?!? That is something.

well, he IS tech an otherworlder, so maybe it's a skill that awakens/bypasses it. tho considering this is focused on the sex part idk if we'll get a story like "the other girls got jealous and tries to push her off the stairs"

you can still tech have sex while pregnant, up to a certain point but imagine if he knocked someone up and then 3 months later sou does it again and ends up giving her a second child while the first child is still inside (i have heard of cases with 'fraternal twins' where someone would have sex with more than one partner and getting pregnant from both but unlikely for suzuki to make a move on any of these girls lol)

This is kinda sad...
Like come on, the first girl in the series getting preggo is the one WITH PHOBIA of babies?
Poor Hinata

she's not afraid of babies (unless there was a scene where she had a viscerally negative reaction where she visited a friends house and their mom had a new born or so that i don't remember XP), she's afraid of turning into her mom basically

I got a bit uncomfortable there. Sou just assaulted Hinata.

it's kinda a hentai trope(?) for the girl to go "no, don't~" even when it's consensual, pretty sure he went multiple rounds/wore other girls down too altho i guess he did stop where the other girl fainted with her eyes open tho CNC (consensual non consent) and dubcon (dubious con, like, i guess when sleeping/unconscious? with an established partner and not just like having sex with a sleeping stranger/something like being impaired/drunk or so but i wouldn't know if there's much details of that in hentai specifically for them to have it be like that) are fetishes/kinks too so yeah [i think there might be some hypnosis/mind control hentai that don't have a rape tag even tho it's clearly not consensual, even if they have like 'emotionless' or so]

i wonder if we'll get a 'reverse' rape of suzuki being pinned by that one jirai kei? girl or so unless the author doesn't wanna go that route

 

[rakkunburns]

it's kinda a hentai trope(?) for the girl to go "no, don't~" even when it's consensual, pretty sure he went multiple rounds/wore other girls down too altho i guess he did stop where the other girl fainted with her eyes open tho CNC (consensual non consent) and dubcon (dubious con, like, i guess when sleeping/unconscious? with an established partner and not just like having sex with a sleeping stranger/something like being impaired/drunk or so but i wouldn't know if there's much details of that in hentai specifically for them to have it be like that) are fetishes/kinks too so yeah [i think there might be some hypnosis/mind control hentai that don't have a rape tag even tho it's clearly not consensual, even if they have like 'emotionless' or so]

i wonder if we'll get a 'reverse' rape of suzuki being pinned by that one jirai kei? girl or so unless the author doesn't wanna go that route

Oh wow, there's a trope for that? I guess I should put my faith into the author more since you did remind me that Sou did not touch Maria while she was unconscious.

 

[NarlepoaxIII]

Aren't you reading far too much into a porn Manga ?

Why should porn have a lower standard of writing than any other type of fiction?

If this were a non-explicit romance story, and the man raped one of his prospective lovers, that would be a major story moment that would require a very serious addressal. If the story moved on without addressing that serious moment, that would be a huge sign of extremely bad writing.

I don't think that, just because it's porn, the story should be forgiven for bad writing.

 

[draco0305]

Why should porn have a lower standard of writing than any other type of fiction?

If this were a non-explicit romance story, and the man raped one of his prospective lovers, that would be a major story moment that would require a very serious addressal. If the story moved on without addressing that serious moment, that would be a huge sign of extremely bad writing.

I don't think that, just because it's porn, the story should be forgiven for bad writing.

Its not bad writing (?), just a usual porn trop, and Sou evolve in a world where even a little bit of male dominance open up doors to all he wants, and this Sou clearly understood that he was a litteral god in this world

 

[NarlepoaxIII]

Its not bad writing (?), just a usual porn trop

Forgiving someone for rape is not a common trope.

Depicting rape is fairly common in porn. For stories that are about rape, that is.

Rape porn is hot (in theory) because it's rape. It doesn't gloss over the fact that it's rape. In fact, it focuses on that fact. It doesn't try to act like it's not a big deal. The fact that it is a major violation of a person is what makes it hot. The forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest.

Rape porn virtually never sticks around long enough to see the realistic outcome for a person being raped. Because that would be fucking depressing, and nobody wants a heavy gut-punch of guilt to go along with their post-nut-clarity.

The first rule of good writing is believability. A well-written fictional character should act like a real person. If a character is raped in a story, they should act like they were raped, in accordance with their character.

Hinata trusted Sou, and he thoroughly violated that trust. She wanted him to stop, and she told him as much, but he didn't.

This should be a HUGE fucking deal for Hinata. The very first time she had sex with Sou, she explained that the last thing she wants is to get pregnant. Sou has known about Hinata's aversion to pregnancy since within the first week of meeting her. But he decided that getting his rocks off was more important than giving even half a shit about her feelings.

Realistically, Hinata should feel betrayed and horrified that Sou would do that to her. Realistically, she should want to never speak to him again.

I don't believe that's what's actually going to happen in this story. Given the happy-go-lucky tone of the story so far, I really doubt that we're going to swing hard into dark character drama territory. But at the very least, Hinata needs to be upset with Sou and confront him about it.

If she just doesn't really care about this, that would be completely unbelievable. People don't act like that in real life. People don't react to being repeatedly raped by someone they trusted with an, "Oh well, c'est la vie."

That would be objectively bad writing.

 

[Shamz]

Whatever you say, bro.
People can engage with a story if they want, as deeply as they want. Mocking and complaining about them for it seems more like you'd rather the content of their observations not happen at all.

Thank you for turning the lights on for me. Ive read comments in other series where people are rejecting others"negative" opinion when you really dont need to engage in an argument because people can feel however they want. And i was falling into a trap here by thinking people on the other side were overreacting.

For me, Sou's being unrestrained here means there will be some actual plot in the upcoming chapters which is a good thing. But people who have a problem with it and saying rape this rape that are not wrong either.

If anything, people are overreacting towards the other side or ive just fallen into another trap. Nah the arguments are pointless so im sure im not in a trap.

 

[animan095]

Lolz, I knew it, she will be the first of many

 

[Geako]

This r18 chapter is getting discussion like Normal Version. There is progress here.

 

[draco0305]

Forgiving someone for rape is not a common trope.

Depicting rape is fairly common in porn. For stories that are about rape, that is.

Rape porn is hot (in theory) because it's rape. It doesn't gloss over the fact that it's rape. In fact, it focuses on that fact. It doesn't try to act like it's not a big deal. The fact that it is a major violation of a person is what makes it hot. The forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest.

Rape porn virtually never sticks around long enough to see the realistic outcome for a person being raped. Because that would be fucking depressing, and nobody wants a heavy gut-punch of guilt to go along with their post-nut-clarity.

The first rule of good writing is believability. A well-written fictional character should act like a real person. If a character is raped in a story, they should act like they were raped, in accordance with their character.

Hinata trusted Sou, and he thoroughly violated that trust. She wanted him to stop, and she told him as much, but he didn't.

This should be a HUGE fucking deal for Hinata. The very first time she had sex with Sou, she explained that the last thing she wants is to get pregnant. Sou has known about Hinata's aversion to pregnancy since within the first week of meeting her. But he decided that getting his rocks off was more important than giving even half a shit about her feelings.

Realistically, Hinata should feel betrayed and horrified that Sou would do that to her. Realistically, she should want to never speak to him again.

I don't believe that's what's actually going to happen in this story. Given the happy-go-lucky tone of the story so far, I really doubt that we're going to swing hard into dark character drama territory. But at the very least, Hinata needs to be upset with Sou and confront him about it.

If she just doesn't really care about this, that would be completely unbelievable. People don't act like that in real life. People don't react to being repeatedly raped by someone they trusted with an, "Oh well, c'est la vie."

That would be objectively bad writing.

I mean, like I said, MC is a king/god in this world, and every women in the story act like their are part of a cult, so MC doing whatever the fuck he want is pretty realistic in the world he live in now...
And there is a lot of porn stories (both on the japanese and Korean side) that take place in our world, and when rape is committed (in general by MC) there is little to no consequences to the act.
So at this point, yes its just a porn trop

 

[Wolvenworks]

Curse you oddly-specific foreshadowing!

 

[Agumentic]

The first rule of good writing is believability. A well-written fictional character should act like a real person

Entirely wrong. There's a reason character tropes exist and it's not because "that's how an average real person would react".

 

[NarlepoaxIII]

Entirely wrong. There's a reason character tropes exist and it's not because "that's how an average real person would react".

An empty trope with no actual personality inside it is not a good character, my man.

 

[Asadfevrier]

Fair point, but if I were Sou, I would think sex loses all meaning when it's so freely given or even forced on you and at that point it be jerking off with extra steps, maybe I am being weird about it but I am seeing it less of a paradise and a more sexual dystopia so it's kind of understandable why men are the way they are in that world which of course Sou is the exception he might think he's hit the jackpot but when you get older, that stuff will get old really fast. But I am probably overthinking a hentai plot lol

You may have a point about “sex loses all meaning if given so freely”, but I think that reality would hit you at a much later date. And yes, Sou is an exception. I understand why the men became what they are in that world, I’m just saying that if more men in our world got sent there, they’d take complete advantage of it.