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I honestly think Takeda Super was doing a good job writing a great story until this arc (most recent 3 chapters), which is admittedly pretty damn horrible as of now.Chapterly reminder that Takeda "goonbrain" Super can not write a coherent story to save his life. He is just decent enough at drawing porn. That's literally it. I know manga readers tend to run defense for bad writing with their headcannons but there is nothing you can do here.
Can go into more detail if anyone wants to hear it, but personally I think the retcon made a lot of sense and was the right choice in terms of storytelling (and not just an excuse to extend the story and draw more smut). For example, there's a lot of subtle tension and drama in the final page of Chapter 88, where Shigemi doesn't even stop to acknowledge Agawa as she walks past her.
That said, I'm more attached to the OG finished series right now because I think Takeda Super messed up really badly with these last 3 chapters. It's not good writing, and I can't defend it.
Still waiting for Agawa's glorious return.
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