At first I thought the MangaToon English translation was a machine translation, but I suspect it was done by a non-fluent ESL learner. There's certain nuances that a ESL user would get wrong more often than a MTL would, like using "this" instead of "those" or using nouns instead of the verb form. While readable, you have to bear in mind all the way. Translation does get better, but is at a passable level by the end.