Degraded to Livestock - Oneshot

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Crap. Totally. I wish I had the two minutes of my life I lost reading this shit back.
 
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Glad i stopped reading after the first page and came here to complain about my broken immersion. I mean, for fucks sake, you're living in a country that's liberal enough to give ordinary-ass animals the same freedoms as humans, but are able to play ninth-dimensional chess in order to justify treating humanoid and (presumably) sapient abhumans as livestock? Some porn artists should be banned from creating anything with even the most bare-bones of plots
 
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Heck, even as an edgy h-story, it doesn't really work. The entire thing is just far too impersonal to get any sense of sadism out of.
Neither of the characters are interesting in any way, which makes even the humiliation absolutely worthless.
 

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